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Discussion on: Image 202 - "Ohio Farmland"

Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 202 - "Ohio Farmland"

Original - Jacqueline (Jackie)
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CameraCanon » Digital Rebel
Original Date2004-10-24 17:10:16
Focal Length70 mm
Aperturef 8
ISO100
Exposure Time1/200 sec
FlashNo Flash
TripodNo
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Ben Wouters (baw)
Msg: #1


July 2nd 2005
03:27:27
Hi Jackie. Saw some of your pics in the "waiting room" to be critiqued. Imo they all have the same way of viewing the landscape. They all have the horizon more or less centred. This could be ok with a very interesting cloudscape, but this sky is rather ordinary imo.
General wisdom has it that off-centre is usually more interesting. (remember the rule of thirds?)
My version tries to show how you may have composed differently on the same subject.
What do you think?

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Ben Wouters (baw)
Jacqueline (Jackie)
Msg: #2


July 2nd 2005
16:39:14
I like yours and mine both, actually I was trying for the field and not the houses, another out the window on the run shot  LOL  I liked the texture yes the sky is a little boring but it was there and I didnt crop. I do like yours tho  Thanks
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Ben Wouters (baw)