 | Discussion on: Image 154 - "Into the wild world" |
| Discussion on: Image 154 - "Into the wild world" |
Discussion on: Image 154 - "Into the wild world" | ||||||||||||||||||||||
| Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 154 - "Into the wild world" | ||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Bob Wallace (BobTrips) Msg: #1 June 28th 2005 12:13:12 | Nice Ben. How about a tighter crop? (I also boosted the contrast a bit.) |
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| Ben Wouters (baw) Msg: #2 June 28th 2005 15:15:37 | I do like the original better because it conveys the moving from near to far a bit better imo. The edges of the red gravel leading towards the elephants as well. What do you think? | |||||||||||||||||||||
| Bob Wallace (BobTrips) Msg: #3 June 28th 2005 23:58:48 | I know what you mean about the longer foreground. It does add more depth. I'm a bit bothered by the slight OOF in the closest area. Perhaps you could improve that with some careful use of the sharpening tool? | |||||||||||||||||||||
| Bob Wallace (BobTrips) Msg: #4 June 29th 2005 00:06:48 | I tried sharpening the foreground a bit. Perhaps ham-handed. And I cropped the left off a bit for fun. |
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| Ben Wouters (baw) Msg: #5 June 29th 2005 08:41:20 | I think we're not going to agree on the composition. Sharpening looks fine, but the rule of thirds isn't going to work for me on this one. | |||||||||||||||||||||
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