 | Discussion on: Image 130 - "Red Berries" |
| Discussion on: Image 130 - "Red Berries" |
Discussion on: Image 130 - "Red Berries" | ||||||||||||||||||||||
| Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 130 - "Red Berries" | ||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Bob Wallace (BobTrips) Msg: #1 June 17th 2005 13:25:37 |
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| Bob Wallace (BobTrips) Msg: #2 June 17th 2005 13:30:57 | Hi Camille - Welcome to Jeber. It's nice seeing a new 'face' around here. First, I like a lot of things about this shot. I like the colors, the bright red and rich green. I like the composition with the branch entering in the upper left and exiting lower right. And the out of focus background works well. I don't care for the out of focus berries in the lower right. I tried a crop to see if I could loose the berries while still maintaining the rest of the qualities. I'm not sure I like what I ended up with - my version looses the nice leaf in the lower left. (A smaller aperture/f-stop would have helped with holding focus. ) | |||||||||||||||||||||
| Bob Wallace (BobTrips) Msg: #3 June 17th 2005 13:38:41 | Here's a different crop. (BTW, I sharpened both crops a bit before uploading.) |
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