 | Discussion on: Image 320 - "Lazy river" |
| Discussion on: Image 320 - "Lazy river" |
Discussion on: Image 320 - "Lazy river" | ||||||||||||||||||||
| Discussion, revisions and constructive criticisms of Image 320 - "Lazy river" | ||||||||||||||||||||
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| Bob Wallace (BobTrips) Msg: #1 July 19th 2005 02:16:42 | You did a very good job of composing, focusing and exposing this shot. The light bits - the patch of sky and bright tree trunk on the left pull my eye away from the rest of the picture. Take a look at this crop which gets rid of them and, I think, makes the picture a bit richer. (I also sharpened a bit.) |
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| Camille (cnut) Msg: #2 July 28th 2005 01:20:34 | Gayathri very nice shot. I just cropped a bit off the bottom. I like the tree on the left and the tiny patch of sky peeping out on the right. I tried a sharpen but did not like that. |
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| Gayathri Sundar (treestump) Msg: #3 August 24th 2005 12:23:29 | Bob and Camille, Thanks for the revisions. Actually I do like that bit of sky on the right and also the tree branch (/) that makes an X with another (·) branch. Never realized that until after the photograph! | |||||||||||||||||||
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Revision: 2 Camille (cnut) |
Revision: 1 Bob Wallace (BobTrips) |
